Simplicity is the glory of expression. Walt Whitman.


Saturday, March 16, 2013

 
in a cloud-like haze
this water on the ground
silently reflects
the only things that we are.

by and by, 
we all seem lost and so vulnerable under the grey and blue sky.

(in response to this week's trifectra writing challenge.)
This weekend we're asking for exactly 33 words inspired by the following photo.  Please remember that if you use the photo on your own blog, you must give proper credit.

9 comments:

Suzanne said...

This is beautiful! I love the imagery and the way you've set the mood. Well done!

tin said...

my very first entry. took a lot to overcome being too self-conscious with my work. thank you for your support.

Anonymous said...

Lovely. Really enjoyed it.

barbara said...

glad you entered! welcome to the challenge - this was quite lovely

Anonymous said...

I love the message in this. Beautifully written.

tin said...

thank you all for your support. this is very encouraging, especially from seasoned writers.

Draug said...

This is very pretty. I love it.

Anonymous said...

I love the wistfulness of this

kymm said...

Lost and vulnerable. Check.